Shade, light and dark
A little bit more
I’m getting closer
A bit closer
To theย image
I adore most
But my right hand
Started trembling
And the lines drifted
Away and away
And to deformity
It paved way
I need to erase
And retrace
And catch moments lost
While I slowly drifted
Toย the sea of mistakes,
Ocean of distress.
I’ll try again and again.
I’ll keep trying till I make it right
At least, till I make it right.
27 responses to “Drawing”
Whoa ! ! That’s pretty !
I can’t draw to save my soul. TT.TT
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Haha thanks Ren….
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Reblogged this on penpowersong.
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salamat po sa reblog
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Kay ganda ๐ Loved the colors and movements… yung hinangin yung buhok, gandang image ๐ Gusto ko yung dress nya… ๐
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ha ha salamats…. ๐ gusto ko din magsuot ng ganyang dress…saan ba may costume party haha
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Malapit na ang flores de mayo… Sa Dubai ba may mga ganyang event yung parang fiesta, o kung ano anong event?
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Nakuu po. Walang flores de mayo dito…ang event lang dito mga concert, carshow, marathon ek ek…mga ganyan lang hahaha panget joke. Nga pala…buti na lang di na mukhang robot yung puno ko hahahahaha
Sasali ka ba sa flores de mayo hihihi
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Hindi ah, ang ganda kaya! Naiinggit kaya ako sa marunong mag drawing, kaso hindi ko talaga mailabas sa drawing ko yung gusto ko iexpress… kaya tula tula lang..
hahah hindi ako mahilig sumali sa flores de mayo, oo nung grade school ako hanggang grade 5 yata.. pero nung lumaki na ko ayoko na.. mahiyain kasi ako eh ๐
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Hahaha pilit lang naman ako ng pilit magdrawing hahahaha….minsan maganda ang kinalalabasan minsan hinde haha
Aw…ako never nakasali sa mga ganyan haha
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Umuwi ka na at isasali kita dito samen.. Buhay pa flores de mayo dito, tara na ๐
Ahhh naka limutan ko, nag respond yung Drunk poetry pero ang labo eh, sabi: Thank you for your submission blah blah… See you at the poetry night ๐ (merong smiley) so hindi ako pumunta hahaha ano yun joke or mind torture haha. Iintayin ko kung matatawag yung pangalan ko or hindi hahaha anlabo
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๐๐๐๐ di ata sakin bagay isali sa flores de mayo hahahaha
Nagsubmit din ako tapos ganyan nga lang reply…thank you blah blah…di naman pinakita yung mga nanalo haha
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Hahaha kaya nga.. Feeling ko tuloy nag fish lang sila ng tao para mapuno yung event..
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Ha ha ha….anyways…ayus lang…wala naman nawala haha
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Yep, pag may nahanip din ako isesend ko sayo..
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Hehehe
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Very lovely this is!
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Haha. Thanks Hammad
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I love the poem and the drawing with it. I think we all have these moments described so well in the poem. Just a few words and so much meaning and emotion. Found your blog via Diwata’s wonderful poem. Best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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Hi Charles,
Thank you so much for the follow and for visiting my blog. I just saw this comment in spam…naughty wordpress…
I am glad that you liked the drawing and the poem and will also check your poems ๐
– Aysa
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Hi Aysa, thanks for your comments, I have also been having problems with messages going into my spam box, so also check it out each. ๐
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Bagay sa u for sure ang ganyang dress… ๐
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Naku po…. ๐๐๐๐
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Nice drawing! ๐
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ha ha salamats…trip na trip ko lang magdrawing lately eh haha
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such a pleasant poem to accompany delicate drawing ๐
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Oh…thanks for the nice words and for passing by ๐
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