Today’s Sunset

I left the office earlier than usual. It was drizzling and the sky was dark. ‘Yet another day without the sunset,’ I told myself.

I took the bus and then the train, my usual journey home.

I boarded the train and there wasn’t a single chair available so I looked for a place where I could possibly stand comfortably, if I could be comfortable at all.

I stood facing west and saw a difference in color. The sky wasn’t as dark as I thought. At least, not on the other side. Not on the side where the sun was setting. It was orange or maybe yellow orange or maybe gold. I don’t know exactly how I could possibly describe the  color of the sky, the beauty was just beyond words.

I wanted to take a photo of this one of a kind sunset, one of the most beautiful I have seen recently, but I doubt the camera of my phone will get even half the beauty of what I was seeing. So I ditched the idea and just stood still.

I stood still not minding the weight of the bags I was carrying on both shoulders, the noise of people chatting, the rush of passengers moving in and out of the cabin, pushing through, squeezing themselves in.

I just looked at the sun. I looked at it while it slowly showed itself. I looked at it as it gently moved away from the grayish clouds that hid its glory.

Each train station we passed by led me home, just like each slow descent have sent the sun to its rest.

For a moment I felt like it was just me and the sun. Looking at each other. Saying our goodbyes to yet another day.

34 responses to “Today’s Sunset”

  1. This is so beautifully written! 🙂
    p.s. – Not sure if it’s just my computer glitching, but it looks like you posted this same article 4 times today! 🙂

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    1. Wait yeah. I see it posted four times too.

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      1. Yeah. I thought so. Error ng error napost naman pala haha

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        1. Haha happens to me too. Lalo na pag gumagawa ka ng Last minute edits.

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          1. Oo tapos pag ipopost mo na saka mawawala wala ang net grrrrr

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    2. Thanks. Yeah posted 4 times hehehe crazy

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    1. 😅😀😁😄😶

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  2. Sabi ko na, may glitch. daming post… hehehe! siguro you are thinking of your loved one! 🙂

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    1. Hahahah. Anggulo nga ng wp kagabi Sir O. Toinks. Maganda lang talaga yung sunset kahapon hehe

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  3. So beautiful! I guess we all have that moments where suddenly we have that deep connection with our surrounding. Me personally, I love looking at the clouds especially when the sky is sooo blue! For some reason it gives me a sense of peace ♥

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    1. Correct. The feeling just comes in.

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  4. You’re such a good storyteller 🙂

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  5. I agree with Gracelyn! 🙂
    Uy, ang ganda talaga ng sunset. Sayang lang hindi kayang kunan ng camera. Pero bawing bawi naman sa pagkakakwento mo. 🙂

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    1. Haha. Salamats pero sayang pa rin…kung nakunan ko lang…wala akong super slr lol

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  6. Lovely ramble. The train journey’s after work can be hectic. Packed to the brim with hardly any room to move, but also good fodder for inspiration.

    Let me use the opportunity to invite you to the Bloggers brunch that I am hosting over the weekend Saturday – Sunday. I believe it will be fun to mingle with others. The invitation is titled, It’s Brunch Party Time. I will send one out again tomorrow. My regards.

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    1. yaiks! just saw this comment today 😦

      thanks for the nice words and invitation…missed the brunch though

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      1. Aww. That’s okay. Another time hopefully.

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  7. Pati ako nadala mo sa post mo. Ang ganda 🙂

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    1. Tahahaaha. Salamat

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  8. aww such a beautiful post… Sunsets and going home has some amazing feeling wrapped around itself..

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    1. Thank you 😀

      yes sunsets and going home somehow is related 😀

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  9. Kapatid. Nakikita kitang nagmo-moment sa kapogian ni Sunny kapag papalubog na siya ah.

    I just love how you described and savored the magic that I call sunset. Ang galing, Aysa.

    The tone and the theme is a far cry from your usual post. Be that as it may, I so like it; in fact, parang effective ka din sa ganyan post.

    More please…hehe

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    1. Andaming moments na ako ay nagmomoment (anudaw haha) pero madalas ako magmoment kapag sunset hehe.

      Pag binabasa ko ulit parang nagtataka ako…ako ba talaga ang nagsulat nito haha….but…salamats po Sir 😀

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  10. Ang ganda ng pagkasulat mo. ♥ Nakakainggit!!!

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    1. Hehe salamat mula sa kaibuturan ng 6 feet sisid 😀

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      1. HAHAHAHAHA. Ang funny mo talaga at ang galling pa sumulat. 😉

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  11. ang ganda nito, kahit hindi ko nakita yung sunset parang nakita ko na din, sinulat mo feelings mo so naramdaman ko din 🙂

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    1. hihihi…salamats…andaming ko dyang ka-emo-han eh…kahit babyahe na lang nyan pauwi eh umaarte pa haha :p

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      1. ok lang yan, maganda ang nasusulat mo .. kaya go lang sa ka emo-han 🙂

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